スーパーの裏でヤニ吸うふたり 🚬 - Week 10 (Beginner Book Club - Behind the Supermarket, Smoking with You)

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Did you mean this panel?

The soft white dots covering the whole panel is a technique used in this manga to relay that this is a memory. She is just recollecting memories of how she should at least be faster than she is and how the customer service smile isn’t coming to her naturally. (Those memories were a little too much.)

This is all in response to how 佐々木 says 「適当なの?」、「いつもあんなに一生懸命なのに」.

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Flashback in a flashback.

I was more pointing out the her mouth is too far up her face in that panel lmao

/edit also, just a hint of sailor fuku, unless it’s from when she was a uni student (the ossan calls her a student but I can’t recall if it was uni student or just a high schooler at that point)

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It’s less “practicing” and more “demonstrating what she’s bad at to herself while thinking about it”, but yeah, this is supposed to be the act of smiling.

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25-8=17. high-schooler?

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Well, I finished my current manga so I thought I’d just check out volume 2 and before I knew it, I was 20 pages in :slight_smile: I found it really easy reading compared with the last volume.

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If anyone is interested, I was struggling with the handwritten Kanji in the author’s note at the end so I spent some time to transcribe it. There was only one part that I couldn’t work out marked with a “?” in the first line. It’s just a vertical line and I couldn’t figure out if it’s a number 1 or part of the following Kanji?

Note

スーパーの裏でヤニ吸うふたりを?箱お買い上げ頂き
ありがとうございます、地主です。
ずっとフィクションの煙草のかっこよさに憧れていたので
煙草を中心にしたお話が描けて、ましてや単行本に出来て嬉です。
あと、スーパーのスイニグドアの開く音が「ばふ」なのは
死ぬほど自信があります。
自分の漫画が紙に印刷される事が一番漫画を描いていて嬉しい事なので、
Twitterであし定期的に描いていたこの漫画をこれから毎月紙面で連載できるのが楽しみです
ページ数なども少し増えるので出来ることが増えたヤニすうをどうぞお楽しみに
単行本からこの漫画を知って頂いた方も本当にありがとうございます。
ビッグガンガン編集部ならびに
担当編集の永野樣、装丁をしてくださった中村様
そしていつも応援して下さる皆様をおかげで
この本が完成したことをお礼申し上げます、
次回もどうぞご期待ください。

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Wow. I’m… oddly surprised I (vibe) understand a fair chunk of that. I just sort of dismissed it in my head because of the handwriting. (It helps to know the sort of thing authors put in their author notes for their books though)

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I think it’s just a 1, followed by a counter for boxed objects – which is somewhat weird, shouldn’t manga volumes be counted by 一冊?

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They like to play around with the counter for these, a box would make thematix sense here, as in box of cigarettes

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Agreed, checked volume 2 and it has a very similar ‘thanks for buying’ sentence in which the questionable characters are replaced with 一箱, and it now makes a lot more sense considering the theme. Thanks for the help!

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