๐Ÿ‘ป Week 7 10ๅˆ†ใงใ‚ˆใ‚ใ‚‹ใ“ใ‚ใ„่ฉฑใƒป10 minute Scary Stories (Absolute Beginner Book Club)

Page 62 Sentence 1

ใชใซใ€ใกใ‚Šใ‚‡ใ†ใจ ใ„ใฃใŸใฃใฆใ€ใฝใ‚“ใฝใ‚“ใจ ใฆใ‚’ ใŸใŸใ‘ใฐ ใ—ใซใŒใฟใฏ ใ„ใชใใชใ‚‹ใ€‚

Even If I told you what treatment

God of death disappeared with clapping hands with a bang-bang.

Page 62 Sentence 2

ใใ‚Œใง ใŠใŠใ‚‚ใ†ใ‘ใฃใฆ ใ‚ใ‘ใ•ใ€‚

Therefore
Large Profit
Cause

Page 62 Sentence 3

ใใ‚Œใ ใ‘ ใ„ใ†ใจใ€ใ—ใซใŒใฟใฏ ใใˆใฆ ใ—ใพใ„ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

With that alone Said, god of death disappeared.

Page 62 Sentence 4

ใชใ‚‹ใปใฉใ€ใ„ใ„ ใ“ใจใ‚’ ใใ„ใŸใจใ€ใŠใŠใ‚ˆใ‚ใ“ใณใฎ ใ‚‚ใธใ„ใ•ใ‚“ใ€‚

Thatโ€™s right, when Mohei heard the good Thing He was of delight.

Page 62 Sentence 5

ใ•ใฃใใใ€ใŠใใ•ใ‚“ใŒ ใŠใใ‚Œใ‚‹ใฎใ‚‚ ใ‹ใพใ‚ใšใ€ใ„ใ—ใ‚ƒใฎ ใ‹ใ‚“ใฐใ‚“ใ‚’ ใ ใ—ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

Immediately
Wife woke Up again to be concerned
Put Out doctorโ€™s sign

I really hope the next Story will be easier to translate.

Page 63 Sentence 1

ใใ—ใฆ ใ—ใฐใ‚‰ใใ™ใ‚‹ใจโ€ฆโ€ฆใ€‚

And then a short time later โ€ฆ

Page 63 Sentence 2

ใซใปใ‚“ใฐใ—ใฎ ใปใ†ใฎ ใŠใŠใใช ใ‚„ใ—ใใ‹ใ‚‰ ใ‚‚ใธใ„ใ•ใ‚“ใ‚’ ใŸใšใญใ‚‹ ใฒใจใŒ ใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

From the direction of a Bridge of a big mansion Mohei was visited by people.

Page 63 Sentence 3

ใ“ใกใ‚‰ใซใ€ใ‚ใŸใ‚‰ใ—ใ„ ใŠใ„ใ—ใ‚ƒใ•ใพใŒ ใ„ใ‚‰ใฃใ—ใ‚ƒใ‚‹ใจ ใใ„ใฆ ใพใ„ใ‚Šใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

In this direction, a new doctor
ใใ„ใฆ ใฟใ‚‰ใ„ใพใ—ใŸ
ใใ ใพใ„ใ‚‹
to hear to go/to come

Page 63 Sentence 4

ใ†ใกใฎ ใŠใ˜ใ‚‡ใ†ใ•ใพใŒ ใชใŒใ„ ใ“ใจ ใ‚„ใพใ„ใง ใตใ›ใฃใฆ ใŠใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚

Our daughter
Long things
came down by illness

Page 64 Sentence 1

ใŠใŠใใฎ ใ„ใ—ใ‚ƒใซใ€ใ•ใ˜ใ‚’ ใชใ’ใ‚‰ใ‚Œใฆ ใ—ใพใ„ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

Many doctorโ€™s gave up.

Page 64 Sentence 2

ใฉใ†ใ‹ใ€ใฟใฆ ใ„ใŸใ ใ‘ใชใ„ใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ‹ใ€‚

Would you mind to see If you can do something?

Long post incomingโ€ฆ

ใŸใ™ใ‹ใ‚Šใใ†

Yes, thatโ€™s right. Iโ€™d translate ใŸใ™ใ‹ใ‚‹ as โ€˜to surviveโ€™ and ใใ† is โ€˜appears/seemsโ€™
ใŸใ™ใ‹ใ‚Šใใ† - (people) who seem like theyโ€™ll survive

Page 61 Sentence 2

Pretty close, Iโ€™d say itโ€™s something like:

ใใ‚ŒใŒ ใฟใˆใ‚Œใฐ

If you can see this, (whether or not someone will live or die)

ใฒใจใ‚‚ใ†ใ‘ใซ ใชใ‚‹
To become a money making opportunity

Note that itโ€™s using ใชใ‚‹, to become, here.

ใใ‚ŒใŒ ใฟใˆใ‚Œใฐใ€ใฒใจใ‚‚ใ†ใ‘ใซ ใชใ‚‹ใ˜ใ‚ƒใชใ„ใ‹ใ€‚

If you can see (whether a sick person will live or die), itโ€™ll become a money making opportunity, wonโ€™t it?

Page 62 Sentence 1

ใชใซใ€ใกใ‚Šใ‚‡ใ†ใจ ใ„ใฃใŸใฃใฆ

This is the ใฃใฆ quoting particle, which is the casual form of the quoting particle ใจ
So weโ€™ll need to treat the entire section beforehand as a quote.

ใ€Œใชใซใ€ใกใ‚Šใ‚‡ใ†ใจ ใ„ใฃใŸใ€ใฃใฆ

ใฃใฆ isnโ€™t always a literal quoting particle, and sometimes means something closer to โ€˜as forโ€ฆโ€™ which is what weโ€™ll translate it as here.

Then the part being quoted:

ใ€Œใชใซใ€ใกใ‚Šใ‚‡ใ†ใจ ใ„ใฃใŸใ€

Literal: โ€œWhat, treatment?โ€ you said

Now, Mohei didnโ€™t actually say โ€˜what treatmentโ€™ but the Shinigami is imagining that Mohei is thinking โ€˜what treatmentโ€™ since Mohei isnโ€™t actually a doctor.

The Shinigami is imagining that Mohei would be confused by the suggestion to become a doctor and treat patients, so this sentence is him imagining Moheiโ€™s response and explaining that actually, the โ€˜treatmentโ€™ is very simple. (clapping your hands together)

ใชใซใ€ใกใ‚Šใ‚‡ใ†ใจ ใ„ใฃใŸใฃใฆ

If youโ€™re saying โ€˜what, treatment?โ€™

or

As for โ€˜what treatmentโ€™โ€ฆ

ใฝใ‚“ใฝใ‚“ใจ ใฆใ‚’ ใŸใŸใ‘ใฐ

If you clap your hands together with a ใฝใ‚“ใฝใ‚“

ใ—ใซใŒใฟใฏ ใ„ใชใใชใ‚‹

The god of death will disappear.

Page 62 Sentence 2

The casual ใฃใฆ quoting particle again.

ใ€Œใใ‚Œใง ใŠใŠใ‚‚ใ†ใ‘ใ€ใฃใฆ ใ‚ใ‘ใ•
ใ€Œthereโ€™s a large profitใ€

ใฃใฆ here is kind of like โ€˜aforementioned,โ€™ the Shinigami is โ€˜quotingโ€™ himself, earlier, saying that there is a good moneymaking opportunity. ใ‚ใ‘ means reason, cause.

ใใ‚Œใง ใŠใŠใ‚‚ใ†ใ‘ใฃใฆ ใ‚ใ‘ใ•ใ€‚

This is the reason I said โ€˜thereโ€™s a large profitโ€™

Page 62 Sentence 5

ใŠใใ•ใ‚“ใŒ ใŠใใ‚Œใ‚‹ใฎ
The wife being woken up

ใ‚‚ particle is just for emphasis- weโ€™ll say it means โ€˜evenโ€™

ใ‹ใพใ‚ใš

ใ‹ใพใ† - to mind

ใ‹ใพใ‚ใš- ใš negative, means โ€˜withoutโ€™

without minding

ใ•ใฃใใใ€ใŠใใ•ใ‚“ใŒ ใŠใใ‚Œใ‚‹ใฎใ‚‚ ใ‹ใพใ‚ใš

Right away, without even minding whether the wife is woken up

ใ„ใ—ใ‚ƒใฎ ใ‹ใ‚“ใฐใ‚“ใ‚’ ใ ใ—ใพใ—ใŸ

(Mohei) put out a doctorโ€™s sign.

Page 63 Sentence 2

This is all one large noun phrase. Letโ€™s work backwards:

[ โ€ฆ ] ใฒใจใŒ ใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

There was a person.

Everything in brackets is describing what kind of person.

[ ใ‚‚ใธใ„ใ•ใ‚“ใ‚’ ใŸใšใญใ‚‹ ] ใฒใจใŒ ใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

[ to call on Mohei ] person

or

There was a person calling on Mohei

ใŠใŠใใช ใ‚„ใ—ใใ‹ใ‚‰

From a big mansion

ใซใปใ‚“ใฐใ—ใฎ ใปใ†ใฎ

The direction/area of Nihonbashi

All togetherโ€ฆ

ใซใปใ‚“ใฐใ—ใฎ ใปใ†ใฎ ใŠใŠใใช ใ‚„ใ—ใใ‹ใ‚‰ ใ‚‚ใธใ„ใ•ใ‚“ใ‚’ ใŸใšใญใ‚‹ ใฒใจใŒ ใ‚ใ‚Šใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

From a big mansion around Nihonbashi, a person came to call on Mohei.

Page 63 Sentence 3

ใ“ใกใ‚‰ใซ

Weโ€™ll translate this just as โ€˜around hereโ€™

ใ‚ใŸใ‚‰ใ—ใ„ ใŠใ„ใ—ใ‚ƒใ•ใพใŒ ใ„ใ‚‰ใฃใ—ใ‚ƒใ‚‹

Now we get into some tricky pages because this character uses keigo. The important thing when you see keigo is to not panic. :slightly_smiling_face:

ใ„ใ‚‰ใฃใ—ใ‚ƒใ‚‹ here is just fancy ใ„ใ‚‹, to be

ใ‚ใŸใ‚‰ใ—ใ„ ใŠใ„ใ—ใ‚ƒใ•ใพใŒใ„ใ‚‹

There is a new doctor

ใจ ใใ„ใฆ ใพใ„ใ‚Šใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

ใพใ„ใ‚‹ is just fancy ใใ‚‹, to come

ใจใใ„ใฆใใพใ—ใŸ

Literal: I heard and came

ใ“ใกใ‚‰ใซใ€ใ‚ใŸใ‚‰ใ—ใ„ ใŠใ„ใ—ใ‚ƒใ•ใพใŒ ใ„ใ‚‰ใฃใ—ใ‚ƒใ‚‹ใจ ใใ„ใฆ ใพใ„ใ‚Šใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

I heard that there was a new doctor around here (and so I came).

Page 63 Sentence 4

Iโ€™m not sure why ใ“ใจ is being used here instead of ใ˜ใ‹ใ‚“ or something, but Iโ€™m pretty sure heโ€™s just saying itโ€™s been a long time that sheโ€™s been ill.

Page 64 Sentence 1

Might be a typo here but โ€˜many doctors have given upโ€™

Let me know if youโ€™re still confused by anything

Hehe, I just wanted to post about the casual ใฃใฆ but @soggyboy was faster. Thank you :slight_smile:

Thanks, I will Go through everything again when Iโ€™ve finished Reading the book.

Oh another thing I always notice with easier material (and hey, we are on a kanji learning plattform, so letโ€™s advocate some!): I feel like texts that have kanji are easier to parse grammarwise. Like the grammar just sticks out a lot more :sweat_smile: Well of course kanji (without furigana) then pose a different kind of challengeโ€ฆ I guess we have to suffer one way or the other. :face_with_peeking_eye:

Yeah, especially since normal Japanese is written without spaces, using kanji makes the word boundaries easier to parse. Like seeing [kanji] ใ—ใ„ will tell your brain itโ€™s an adjective, and that the word starts with the kanji and ends with the ใ„ but something all in hiragana takes more effort to parse. This book tries to get around that problem a bit by including spaces.

Page 64 Sentence 3

ใ•ใฃใใ ใ‚‚ใธใ„ใ•ใ‚“ใŒ ใใฎ ใ„ใˆใ‚’ ใŸใšใญใ‚‹ใจใ€ ใชใ‚‹ใปใฉใ€ใ‹ใŠใ„ใ‚ใฎ ใ‚ใ‚‹ใ„ ใ‚€ใ™ใ‚ใŒ ใ“ใจใซ ใตใ›ใฃใฆ ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚

Immediately Mohei visited that House, the complexion of the daughter was indeed Bad and she was lieing in sickbed.

Page 65 Sentence 1

ใงใ‚‚ใ€ใ—ใซใŒใฟใฏใ€ใใฎ ใ‚€ใ™ใ‚ใฎ ใ‚ใ—ใ‚‚ใจใซ ใ†ใšใใพใฃใฆ ใ„ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

But a god of death was crouching at that daughters feet.

Page 65 Sentence 2

ใ‚„ใ‚„ใ€ใ‚ใ—ใ‚‚ใจใ‹ใ‚‰ ใŸใ™ใ‹ใ‚‹ใฃใฆ ใ„ใฃใฆใŸใชใ‚ใ€ใ‚ใฎ ใ—ใซใŒใฟโ€ฆโ€ฆใ€‚

Oh! Because that god over there at her feet
ใŸใ™ใ‹ใ‚‹ใฃใฆ to survive
ใ„ใฃใฆใŸใชใ‚ ?

Page 65 Sentence 3

ใˆใฃใ€ใชใ‚“ใงใ™ใฃใฆ๏ผŸ

Eh!? I can say with confidence that โ€ฆ

Page 65 Sentence 4

ใ‚ใ€ใ„ใ‚„ใ€ใ“ใฃใกใฎ ใ“ใจใ ใ€‚

Ah! Donโ€™t mind me.

Page 65 Sentence 5

ใ‚ใƒผใ€ใˆใธใ‚“ใ€ใ“ใฎ ใ‚€ใ™ใ‚ใฏ ใŸใ™ใ‹ใ‚‹ใžใ‚ˆใ€‚

Ah, รคhem, this daughter will survive.

Page 65 Sentence 6

ใˆใฃใ€ใปใ‚“ใจใ†ใงใ™ใ‹ใ€‚

Eh! Is that so?

Page 65 Sentence 7

ใชใซใ‹ ใ„ใ„ ใŠใใ™ใ‚ŠใŒโ€ฆโ€ฆ๏ผŸ

Any good medicine โ€ฆ?

Page 65 Sentence 8

ใใ€ใใ™ใ‚Š๏ผŸ

Medicine?

Page 65 Sentence 9

ใ‚ใƒผใ€ใใ™ใ‚Šใชใ‚‰ ใ„ใ‚‰ใชใ„ใžใ‚ˆใ€‚

Ah, medicine is not necessary.

Page 66 Sentence 1

ใ‚‚ใธใ„ใ•ใ‚“ใฏ ใฝใ‚“ใฝใ‚“ใจ ใฆใ‚’ ใŸใŸใใจ ใ‚ใฃใ‘ใซ ใจใ‚‰ใ‚Œใฆ ใ„ใ‚‹ ใ„ใˆใฎ ใฒใจใ‚’ ใฎใ“ใ—ใฆใ€ใ•ใฃใ•ใจ ใ‹ใˆใฃใฆ ใ—ใพใ„ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

ใ‚‚ใธใ„ใ•ใ‚“ใฏ ใฝใ‚“ใฝใ‚“ใจ ใฆใ‚’ ใŸใŸใใจ
Mohei clapped His hands with a bang-bang

ใ‚ใฃใ‘ใซใจใ‚‰ใ‚Œใฆใ„ใ‚‹ ใ„ใˆใฎใฒใจใ‚’ ใฎใ“ใ—ใฆใ€ใ•ใฃใ•ใจ ใ‹ใˆใฃใฆใ—ใพใ„ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚
The dumbfounded Head of house left quickly to Go Back.

Page 66 Sentence 2

ใ‚ˆใใ˜ใคใ€‚ใใฎใ†ใฎ ใ‚„ใ—ใใฎ ใ‚ใ‚‹ใ˜ใŒใ€ใ‚ใ‚ใฆใฆ ใ‹ใ‘ใคใ‘ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

Next day. Yesterdayโ€™s Head of mansion ran Out flustered.

Page 66 Sentence 3

ใ„ใ‚„ใƒผใ€ใณใฃใใ‚Šใ—ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

ใ„ใ‚„ใƒผใ€Expression of disagreement
ใณใฃใใ‚Šใ—ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚to be surprised

Page 66 Sentence 4

ใ›ใ‚“ใ›ใ„ใŒ ใŠใ‹ใˆใ‚ŠใซใชใฃใŸ ใ‚ใจใ€ใ‚€ใ™ใ‚ใฎ ใ‹ใŠใ„ใ‚ใŒ ใฉใ‚“ใฉใ‚“ ใ‚ˆใ ใชใฃใฆใ€ใใ‚‡ใ†ใฏใ€ใ‚‚ใ† ใ‚ใ•ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€ใ”ใฏใ‚“ใ‚’ ใ•ใ‚“ใฐใ„ใ‚‚ ใŸในใฆ ใŠใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚

ใ›ใ‚“ใ›ใ„ใŒ
Doctor

ใŠใ‹ใˆใ‚ŠใซใชใฃใŸ ใ‚ใจใ€
Came Back after

ใ‚€ใ™ใ‚ใฎ ใ‹ใŠใ„ใ‚ใŒ ใฉใ‚“ใฉใ‚“ ใ‚ˆใ ใชใฃใฆใ€
The daughters face color became quickly better

ใใ‚‡ใ†ใฏใ€ใ‚‚ใ† ใ‚ใ•ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€ใ”ใฏใ‚“ใ‚’ ใ•ใ‚“ใฐใ„ใ‚‚ ใŸในใฆ ใŠใ‚Šใพใ™ใ€‚
Today from morning she already are there meals

Page 66 Sentence 5

ใ“ใ‚Œใฏใ€ใปใ‚“ใฎ ใŠใ‚Œใ„ใง ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚

Iโ€™m really thankful for this.

Page 67 Sentence 1

ใใ† ใ„ใฃใฆใ€ใŸใใ•ใ‚“ใฎ ใ“ใฐใ‚“ใ‚’ ใŠใ„ใฆ ใ„ใใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

Thus He went and left behind a Lot of gold coins.

Page 67 Sentence 2

ใ“ใ†ใ—ใฆใ€ใฒใ‚‡ใ†ใฐใ‚“ใฏ ใฉใ‚“ใฉใ‚“ ใฒใ‚ใŒใ‚Šใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

In this way your Reputation will steadily extend.

Page 67 Sentence 3

ใณใ‚‡ใ†ใซใ‚“ใ‚’ ใฟใฆใ€ใ—ใซใŒใฟใŒ ใพใใ‚‰ใ‚‚ใจใซ ใ„ใ‚Œใฐใ€ใ‚ใใ‚‰ใ‚ใชใ•ใ„ใจ ใ„ใ„ใ€ใ‚ใ—ใ‚‚ใจใซ ใ„ใŸใ‚‰ใ€ใฆใ‚’ ใŸใŸใ‘ใฐ ใ„ใ„ใฎใงใ™ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€‚

If you See a Patient with a god of death next to His pillow itโ€™s good to given up, If heโ€™s at His feet clapping your hands is an easy Thing.

Page 68 Sentence 1

ใใ‚“ใ‚ ใ‚ใ‚‹ใฒโ€ฆโ€ฆใ€‚

That certain day โ€ฆ

Page 68 Sentence 2

ใฒใ‚‡ใ†ใฐใ‚“ใฎ ใŠใ„ใ—ใ‚ƒใ•ใพใฏ ใ“ใกใ‚‰ใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ‹๏ผŸ

The doctorโ€™s Reputation โ€ฆ?..

Page 68 Sentence 3

ใŸใšใญใฆ ใใŸใฎใฏใ€ใˆใฉใงใ‚‚ ใ‚†ใณใŠใ‚Šใฎ ใŠใŠใŒใญใ‚‚ใกใ€‚

He was asked by a very rich Person to come to Tokyo.

Page 68 Sentence 4

ใ‚‚ใธใ„ใ•ใ‚“ใฏ ใ‚„ใฃใŸใจ ใฐใ‹ใ‚Šใซ ใงใ‹ใ‘ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

Mohei left with a Hooray.

Page 68 Sentence 5

ใ†ใกใฎ ใฒใจใฏ ใชใŠใ‚Šใพใ™ใ‹ใ€‚

Will my husband recover from illness?

Page 68 Sentence 6

ใŠใใ•ใ‚“ใŒ ใŸใšใญใพใ™ใ€‚

The wife asked.

Page 68 Sentence 7

ใงใ‚‚ใ€ใ“ใ†ใ„ใ† ใจใใซ ใ‹ใŽใฃใฆ ใ—ใซใŒใฟใฏ ใพใใ‚‰ใ‚‚ใจใซ ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚

ใงใ‚‚ใ€
But

ใ“ใ†ใ„ใ† ใจใใซ
Like this time

ใ‹ใŽใฃใฆ ใ—ใซใŒใฟใฏ
confined god of death

ใพใใ‚‰ใ‚‚ใจใซ ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
Is near the pillow

Page 69 Sentence 1

ใ—ใ‹ใ‚‚ใ€ใญใฆใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚

Nevertheless He is sleeping.

Page 69 Sentence 2

ใ„ใใ‚‰ใงใ‚‚ ใ ใ—ใพใ™ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€ใชใ‚“ใจใ‹ ใŸใ™ใ‘ใฆ ใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚

Because you Take out as much as you Like, please Help somehow.

Page 69 Sentence 3

ใ„ใ„ใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ€‚

Itโ€™s good, right?

Page 69 Sentence 4

ใŠใ‹ใญใซ ใ‚ใŒ ใใ‚‰ใ‚“ใ  ใ‚‚ใธใ„ใ•ใ‚“ใฏใ€ใ—ใซใŒใฟใŒ ใ‚ใ‚’ ใ•ใพใ•ใชใ„ใ‚ˆใ†ใซใ€ใใฃใจ ใตใจใ‚“ใ‚’ ใพใ‚ใ—ใฆ ใ—ใพใ„ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

Mohei, who is lost in His greed for money, didnโ€™t wake Up the god of death and turned His Futon softly.

Page 70 Sentence 1

ใ“ใ†ใ—ใฆใ€ใ—ใซใŒใฟใŒ ใ‚ใ—ใ‚‚ใจใซ ใใ‚‹ใ‚ˆใ†ใซ ใ™ใ‚‹ใจใ€ใฝใ‚“ใฝใ‚“ใจ ใฆใ‚’ ใŸใŸใใ€ใชใซใใ‚ใ‚ใฌ ใ‹ใŠใ‚’ใ—ใฆใ€ใŠใ‹ใญใ‚’ ใ‚‚ใ‚‰ใฃใฆ ใ‹ใˆใฃใฆ ใ„ใใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

Thus god of death next to the feet

ใใ‚‹ใ‚ˆใ†ใซใ™ใ‚‹ใจ ?

With a bang-bang His hands

ใŸใŸใ ?

Made an innocent Look, received Money and came Back.

page 65 sentence 2

The ใฃใฆ casual quoting particle strikes again.

ใŸใ™ใ‹ใ‚‹ใฃใฆ

ใ€ŒใŸใ™ใ‹ใ‚‹ใ€ใฃใฆ

ใ„ใฃใฆใŸ - this is the past progressive of ใ„ใ†, to say

Here it is in standard Japanese:

ๅŠฉใ‹ใ‚‹ใจ่จ€ใฃใฆใ„ใŸ

And the story version:

ใŸใ™ใ‹ใ‚‹ใฃใฆใ„ใฃใฆใŸ

โ€œcan be savedโ€ he said

The โ€˜heโ€™ in this case is the Shinigami.

ใ‚„ใ‚„ใ€ใ‚ใ—ใ‚‚ใจใ‹ใ‚‰ ใŸใ™ใ‹ใ‚‹ใฃใฆ ใ„ใฃใฆใŸใชใ‚ใ€ใ‚ใฎ ใ—ใซใŒใฟโ€ฆโ€ฆใ€‚

Literal: Oh, since heโ€™s at the foot of the bed, (the person) can be saved, he said, that Shinigamiโ€ฆ

Page 65 Sentence 3

Not sure where you got โ€˜with confidence,โ€™ here, this is:

ใˆใฃใ€
Eh?

ใชใ‚“
What (ใชใซ)

ใงใ™

ใฃใฆ๏ผŸ
Quoting particle

ใˆใฃใ€ใชใ‚“ใงใ™ใฃใฆ๏ผŸ

Eh, what was that? (What did you say?)

This is the customer speaking to Mohei, who just said the previous sentence about the Shinigami being at the feet.

Page 66 Sentence 1

Almost there, awesome job with this long sentence!

The key here is this:

ใฒใจใ‚’ ใฎใ“ใ—ใฆ

The object of ใฎใ“ใ™, to leave something behind, is ใฒใจใ€‚The ใฒใจ in question is the head of the household, so heโ€™s the one being left behind by Mohei. Donโ€™t forget that Mohei is the subject of the sentence.

ใ‚‚ใธใ„ใ•ใ‚“ใฏ ใฝใ‚“ใฝใ‚“ใจ ใฆใ‚’ ใŸใŸใใจใ‚ใฃใ‘ใซใจใ‚‰ใ‚Œใฆใ„ใ‚‹ ใ„ใˆใฎใฒใจใ‚’ ใฎใ“ใ—ใฆใ€ใ•ใฃใ•ใจ ใ‹ใˆใฃใฆใ—ใพใ„ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

Mohei clapped his hands together with a ใฝใ‚“ใฝใ‚“, and leaving behind the dumbfounded head of household, he quickly returned home.

Page 66 Sentence 2

Yeah, more naturally this would be something like โ€˜the head of household from yesterday came runningโ€™ but you got the idea

Page 66 Sentence 3

[quote=โ€œCherryApple, post:30, topic:69974โ€]
ใ„ใ‚„ใƒผใ€ใณใฃใใ‚Šใ—ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

ใ„ใ‚„ใƒผใ€Expression of disagreement
ใณใฃใใ‚Šใ—ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚to be surprised
[/spoiler]

I think ใ„ใ‚„ here is less like โ€˜noโ€™ and is more just an exclamation, like โ€˜oh my!โ€™

Oh my, Iโ€™m shocked!

Page 66 Sentence 4

ใŠใ‹ใˆใ‚ŠใซใชใฃใŸ = fancy way of saying โ€˜went homeโ€™

Note that โ€˜doctorโ€™ is Mohei, and the head of household is just speaking in the third person.

ใ›ใ‚“ใ›ใ„ใŒใŠใ‹ใˆใ‚ŠใซใชใฃใŸ ใ‚ใจใ€

After you (the doctor) went home,

Looks like a typo but she ate three meals/portions of rice.

Page 67 Sentence 1

ใใ† ใ„ใฃใฆ

This is ใ„ใ†, to say

โ€œSaying thusly,โ€

The ใ„ใ is at the end,

ใŠใ„ใฆ ใ„ใใพใ—ใŸ

He left (coins) and went.

Page 67 Sentence 2

Instead of describing a specific incident/event, weโ€™ve switched to the narrative voice, which is just describing things generally. So this is:

โ€˜In this way, Moheiโ€™s reputation steadily spread.โ€™

Page 67 Sentence 3

Same as the previous sentence.

ใณใ‚‡ใ†ใซใ‚“ใ‚’ ใฟใฆใ€ใ—ใซใŒใฟใŒ ใพใใ‚‰ใ‚‚ใจใซ ใ„ใ‚Œใฐ
โ€˜If Mohei saw a patient with the god of death at their pillow,โ€™

ใ‚ใใ‚‰ใ‚ใชใ•ใ„ใจใ„ใ„

ใ‚ใใ‚‰ใ‚ใชใ•ใ„ = please give up

ใจใ„ใ„

Ok, this is a bit of a tricky one because of the lack of hiragana, andใจใ„ใ„ is a grammar point on its own, but I think this is actually ใจ่จ€ใ„ instead of ใจ่‰ฏใ„ใ€‚Itโ€™s this connector form of the verb. So itโ€™s Mohei saying โ€˜please give up on this patientโ€™

All together and rephrased in third person:

ใณใ‚‡ใ†ใซใ‚“ใ‚’ ใฟใฆใ€ใ—ใซใŒใฟใŒ ใพใใ‚‰ใ‚‚ใจใซ ใ„ใ‚Œใฐใ€ใ‚ใใ‚‰ใ‚ใชใ•ใ„ใจ ใ„ใ„ใ€ใ‚ใ—ใ‚‚ใจใซ ใ„ใŸใ‚‰ใ€ใฆใ‚’ ใŸใŸใ‘ใฐ ใ„ใ„ใฎใงใ™ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ€‚

If Mohei saw a patient with the god of death at their pillow, he said โ€˜please give up on this patient,โ€™ and if it was at their feet, he would clap his hands.

Page 68 Sentence 2

This is someone speaking.

Note that โ€˜reputationโ€™ is modifying โ€˜doctorโ€™

ใฒใ‚‡ใ†ใฐใ‚“ใฎ ใŠใ„ใ—ใ‚ƒใ•ใพใฏ
The reputed/well known doctor

ใ“ใกใ‚‰
Here/this way

ใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ‹

ใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ† literally is like โ€˜probablyโ€™ but here it just makes the sentence fancier, by making it more indirect, as opposed to just attaching ใ‹ to the end of the sentence.

ใ„ใ—ใ‚ƒใฏใ“ใกใ‚‰ใงใ™ใ‹๏ผŸ
Is the doctor here?

ใฒใ‚‡ใ†ใฐใ‚“ใฎใŠใ„ใ—ใ‚ƒใ•ใพใฏใ“ใกใ‚‰ใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ‹๏ผŸ

Is it possible that the esteemed and most reputable doctor is here?

Page 68 Sentence 3

ใŸใšใญใฆ ใใŸใฎใฏ

The one who came and asked

ใˆใฉใงใ‚‚
I think the ใ‚‚ here is emphasis, similar to โ€˜even in Tokyo.โ€™ Not 100% sure on this one, but I think that the particle usage/emphasis here is saying that there are many rich people in Tokyo, but even among them this guy is particularly rich and well known.

Page 68 Sentence 5

Yes, thatโ€™s right that sheโ€™s literally saying โ€˜will he recover?โ€™ but I think that this is another case of how in Japanese, people speak indirectly when theyโ€™re being polite. Sheโ€™s really asking โ€˜will you heal my husband?โ€™ but saying so directly would be less polite.

Page 68 Sentence 7

Looks like I missed an expression when I was doing the vocab sheet. ใซใ‹ใŽใฃใฆ is โ€œparticularly; only; in the case ofโ€‹โ€

ใงใ‚‚ใ€ใ“ใ†ใ„ใ† ใจใใซ ใ‹ใŽใฃใฆ
However, in this particular case,

ใ—ใซใŒใฟใฏ ใพใใ‚‰ใ‚‚ใจใซ ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚
the god of death was by the pillow.

Page 69 Sentence 2

Iโ€™d say that here ใ ใ™ is like โ€˜to giveโ€™ money.

ใ„ใใ‚‰ใงใ‚‚ ใ ใ—ใพใ™ใ‹ใ‚‰

Iโ€™ll give you anything/as much as you want, so

ใชใ‚“ใจใ‹ ใŸใ™ใ‘ใฆ ใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
please help somehow

Page 70 Sentence 1

ใ‚ˆใ†ใซใ™ใ‚‹ is a grammar point meaning โ€˜to see to it that.โ€™ It carries the nuance that the actor (Mohei) is doing something on purpose/intentionally, it didnโ€™t just happen. The shinigami didnโ€™t just somehow end up at the foot of the bed, Mohei made it happen.

ใ“ใ†ใ—ใฆใ€ใ—ใซใŒใฟใŒ ใ‚ใ—ใ‚‚ใจใซ ใใ‚‹ใ‚ˆใ†ใซ ใ™ใ‚‹ใจ

In this way, seeing to it that the Shinigami was at the foot of the bed,

ใฝใ‚“ใฝใ‚“ใจ ใฆใ‚’ ใŸใŸใ

ใŸใŸใ is the same โ€˜to clap,โ€™ itโ€™s just in the conjunctive form here.

Mohei clapped his hands with a ใฝใ‚“ใฝใ‚“ and

ใชใซใใ‚ใ‚ใฌ ใ‹ใŠใ‚’ใ—ใฆใ€ใŠใ‹ใญใ‚’ ใ‚‚ใ‚‰ใฃใฆ ใ‹ใˆใฃใฆ ใ„ใใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

with an innocent look received the money, and went home.

Awesome job with these, I think youโ€™ve improved a lot with understanding longer sentences. The grammar points Iโ€™m pointing out are mostly N3 stuff so youโ€™re doing great for your level/study so far!

Page 67 Sentence 3

After Reading the end of the Story I assumed He might have dine Something like giving His own life force to some patients, but didnโ€™t understood when.

Hmmm, thatโ€™s not quite right, but Iโ€™m working on the corrections on the next week so Iโ€™ll explain the ending there.

Edit, actually I was misremembering the story. Youโ€™re pretty much right, but Iโ€™ll explain where in the other thread