So, I was reading a book in Japanese today and I came across one of those sentences that seemed to just never end. I wanted to share it with others, even if just to say “what is up with this sentence, you guys!?”, but the most recent topic I found for this sort of thing, while informative, is locked. Sadness.
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For the purposes of this thread, let’s consider a sentence everything that happens between 「。」, so maybe not exactly a sentence, but … whatever.
Here. Let me start:
A little context
They made an anime about it:
The sentence takes place roughly towards the end of the book, when the battle between the weasels and the mice has started and is looking dire. The mice are taking shelter in a small hole in a rocky mountain next to ocean, and the weasels are coming across the water..
I like in this sentence how the author continues after one of the commas with 「と思うと急に…」. It literally throws you off, and you feel the same confusion that the mice are likely feeling.
Incidentally, I guess the subject of the 「と思うと」 is actually the mice, but I cannot find where you’d get that from other than the context.
Sentence length in different languages, and why write like this
Sentence length is interesting because different languages have different tolerances for this sort of thing. In English, writing short sentences is a mark of good style. However, in Spanish my impression is that sentences can get much longer before readers start wondering what’s going on (I remember in particular reading Linguistic textbooks by a Spanish scholar called Germán de Granda whose sentences literally spanned pages).
In Japanese, I find that shorter sentences are still preferred, but every once in a while you find these monsters that span multiple lines. I suppose these have special nuances and give off particular impressions. In this case, for instance, I feel that the author was trying to communicate the incessant nature of the attack by the weasels. It just wouldn’t have been the same with shorter sentences.