You can find the comments on it here, unfortunately I don’t think you’ll find much more info: よつばと！Vol 1 Discussion Thread (Beginner's Book Club) - #400 by jstrout
Someone had the English translation and for the narration it was: よつばと！Vol 1 Discussion Thread (Beginner's Book Club) - #408 by Euphony
And nothing wrong with wanting to do it yourself. I’ve been impressed with your work. I don’t mind giving my view, but I feel like I’m not that far along yet either. 