Please help me create Japanese _sentence_ diagrams for beginners

[Rrwrex]

I just created a new diagram in the daily senryu thread.

This was my first attempt at creating a diagram for something with a 〜ば conditional, but I think it makes sense.

Diagram repeated here for convenience

趣味(しゅみ)日舞(にちぶ) 詳(くわ)しくきけば盆踊(ぼんおど)り
If you ask [@ about their] traditional-dance-hobby in detail, [it’s] bon-odori

Thoughts?