Beyond Sleepy’s (pillow fort?) study log

Offhand I can’t think of any instances where I’ve encountered it, but I’m sure if I did see it, that context was able to disambiguate it. Being a learner of the language, I’m probably most likely to see ambiguity as me missing something, rather than the wording being unclear.

This is an extra hurdle for discussion around language interpretation. A translation can be more literal or less literal, and (speaking from my own attempts at translation) this masks the difference between “I understood this, but was loose (or lazy) with the translation” and “I didn’t understand this, and it reflects in the translation.”

Sometimes a response gives you something new, and sometimes it simply tells you what you already know. Either way, we’re all rooting to help one another continue moving forward in learning =D

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So today I read the last three pages of よつばと! volume 1 chapter 1

🍀Translation attempt, pages 48-50🍀

——— 48 ———

ちがうよ?よつばのうちはもっともっと、ずーっと遠くにあるんだよ?

That wrong? My home is very very far far away?

あ‼︎ こ、こいつ何にもわかってなかったのか‼︎

A-?? D- didn’t she understand anything at all (of the process of moving)?

…いいかーよく見ろ、これが

Listen- look, this is

今日からよつばが住む新しい家だ!

the new house you will live in from today onwards

——— 49 ———

おおー⁉︎ 今日からここか⁉︎

Ooh!? From today (we’ll live) here!?

で、こっちが私達の家

So, this is our house

おおっ

Ooh :open_mouth:

とーちゃん!おとなりさんだ‼︎

Dad! They’re our neighbors!!

そうだお隣さんだ

That’s right, they’re our neighbors

——— 50 ———

じゃ、よろしくね、よつばちゃん

Well then, pleased to meet you

よろしくね

pleased to meet you

よろしくー

pleased to meet you

よろしくな‼︎

pleased to meet you!!

じゃああのお姉ちゃんはわるい人じゃないの?

So, “big sister” isn’t a bad person after all?

は?

What?

ちがうのよー

No, that’s wrong :sweat_smile:

——— end ———

This tripped me up a few times and I went through three iterations for the translation: “わかってなかったのか”, I’m guessing のか makes it a question? Not sure what の is doing here. Apart from that I’m pretty confident.

I’ve been listening to a Japanese podcast (あらB.fm) a few times a week just to get used to the sounds and rhythms of Japanese, but lately (最近) a qualitative change has come over the way I listen. The language grabs my attention instead of me having to force my attention towards it, words I know now stand out to me, and I think I’m developing an auditory awareness of grammar and the ability to recognize words I don’t know as words I don’t know instead of as a soup of sounds :stuck_out_tongue: It’s like a switch was flicked. Pretty exciting :upside_down_face:

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Once again, everything looks pretty good on the translations!

I wonder if this is simply the explanatory の. If so, then rather the question of “Did she not understand anything at all?”, it would be more along the lines of, “Is it that she didn’t understand anything at all?”

The logic here is that it’s taking a sentence (「こいつ何にもわかってなかった」), and turning it into a “It is [noun]” sentence. The の turns the sentence into a the “[noun]” portion of “it is [noun]”. And since it’s a question, in English we’d swap the “it is” around to “is it [noun]?”

Supplemental reading on explanatory の.

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Getting used to the nuances of the の here just takes a huge amount of time. In questions you can think of it as making it more inqisitive based on prior information. So the prior information in this case is what yotsuba just sad. “(Given what she just said) Hasn’t she understood anything at all?” (BTW thats a rhetorical question here ^^)
As an example: You see someone looking totally hung over. So you could ask without the の “Did you drink too much?” and that would be perfectly fine. However, It would probably be more natural to formulate it with a の in this case to reference you have some kind of hint that it is actually the case and you are being inqisitive about it.
On the other hand, if you are just chatting normally and ask “What restaurant should we go to?” adding the の to this question would be really unnatural. Why are you being inqisitive? What’s the prior reference??

Hope you can understand a bit what I’m trying to say.
Like I said its a nuance and pretty hard to explain but you will get used to it over time.

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Thank you both for taking the time to explain :pray:

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I read three pages of chapter 2 (volume 1) of よつばと! today:

🍀 よつばと! vol 1, pp 55-57 🍀

——— 55 ———

朝だ‼︎

It’s morning!!

——— 56 ———

ここはどこだ⁉︎

Where is this? (Where am I)

とーちゃん

Dad

おぶっ

Ugh-

たいへんだ!!

It’s terrible!!

——— 57 ———

新しい家だ‼︎

It’s our new house!!

いただきます

Thank you for the meal

おあがりなさい

(A sleepy “you’re welcome/start eating”)

——— end ———

I wanted to read more today, but my university courses are properly picking up the pace this week and I feel the need to cut back on the time I spend on learning Japanese, at least while I readjust to the new demands placed on me.

it’s fine, it’s fine :four_leaf_clover:

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You are doing fine. Many say the first yotsubato chapter is one of the hardest :smiley: . Especially since many have no experience reading japanese and working through the relative wordy first chapter is a big accomplishment setting you up for the rest. Should be (mostly) smooth sailing from now on!

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I’m tired today, but I did read three pages of よつばと!, the quality of the translation might have suffered a bit though :sweat_smile:

🍀 よつばと! vol1, cha2, pp58-60 🍀

——— 58 ———

こっちの牛乳はつめぇな‼︎

This milk is delicious!!

よつば、今日は遊びに行く時ちゃんといってきますって言えよ

Yotsuba, today you must properly tell me when you go out to play

うん!

Yes!

近所の人に会ったらちゃんとあいさつしろよ

If you meet people in the neighborhood you must properly greet them

うん!

Yes!

あーきのうのお隣さんまん中の子はしっかりあいさつてきる子だったぞー, みならえよ

Ah, the middle child among the neighbors from yesterday gave a firm greeting, follow her example (this one was too much for me, here’s a guess tho)

——— 59 ———

追いかけてくる方か?つよい方か?

The one who chased after me? Or the strong one?

ほら大きいお姉さん二人いたろ?

(I don’t get this, can someone explain what’s up with ほら and いたろ? I guess the last part is some form of past tense いる thing, so part of the sentence is “there were two big girls” but beyond that I’m stumped)

かみなげーきれーなの

The one with the long pretty hair

そっちじゃない方だ

Not that one

きれいじゃない方か

So the one that isn’t pretty?

…会ってるけどその言い方は違うな…

…that description fits but that kind of talk is bad…

ごちそーさまでした‼︎

Thank you for the meal

よし、いいあいさつだ

Alright, well said (not exactly, but I’m guessing he’s praising her for being polite at the table)

——— 60 ———

トイレにいってきます‼︎

I’m going to the toilet!!

そのいってきますはいらん

You don’t have to announce that :sweat_smile:

——— end ———

おやすみなさい😴

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I think your guess is pretty close. A couple non-expert notes - It’s できる not てきる - I had to open my copy to check as I sat there thinking 'what the heck is this weird verb

しっかり can also translate like ‘correctly’ or ‘properly’ - You can look at the first half of the sentence as an elaborated AはBです (except that they’ve used だった - so casual past tense).
You have ‘the neighbours’ middle child from yesterday’ は ‘child who can greet people properly/well’ だった.
Slightly more naturally - “The middle child of the neighbours’ from yesterday greets people well, follow her example.”

More of a breakdown for approaching phrases with modifiers like this

Depending on your comfort with longer phrases, this is one where working backwards helps a bit - we have だった - so something existed - stepping back from that, we have 子 - so ‘a child’ existed.

Before that we have a verb - できる - well, that’s not the main verb in the sentence - that’s the だった at the end, so it must be modifying 子. So we have a child who can (or who completed - there are a few meanings to work with in できる, we’ll figure out which one by looking at the rest of the modifier).

Before できる we have あいさつ - so a child who can greet/finished greeting. しっかり is modifying the phrase - it could be properly, firmly etc. In context, I take away ‘a child who can greet (people) properly’

You can do the same with the phrase before the は if it’s getting long and tricky to parse. Working backwards is a bit slow, so I don’t do it all the time, but it’s helpful when there are lots of modifiers or you’re having trouble figuring out how the modifiers relate to each other.

My take here is that the いたろ is a contraction or variation on いただろう - so past tense of いる and then だろう - indicating something ‘is probably’ true, in this context, I’d take is as a confirmation sort of thing. ほら usually translates as something like ‘look’. I’d take it as
“Look, there were 2 big girls, right?” - Like Dad is trying to get Yotsuba to think back about who the 2 girls were to be able to clarify which girl.

I love your translation overall! It captures the gist really well (even when you weren’t sure).

Nice work!

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Yeah, I’m sometimes (unintentionally) sloppy with the dakuten when I’m transcribing, especially when tired :sweat_smile:

Thank you, I think this will be helpful :pray:

Ah, makes sense! Thank you for your help and encouragement :blush:

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I read five short pages today :four_leaf_clover::relieved::four_leaf_clover:

よつばと!vol1, cha2, pp 61-66 🍀

——— 61 ———

…とーちゃーん、かぎこわれた…

…Daaaad, the lock is broken…

とーちゃーん‼︎あかなくなった‼︎

Daaaad!! The lock became stuck!!

——— 63 ———

よ、とお、はあっ、すっげー‼︎

Oh-, hoi, hah!, amaaazing!!

——— 64 ———

うあ… ねちまった…

Uhh… I accidentally fell asleep…

(I really needed the cheat-sheet for this one :point_up:)

よつばー、おーい、まだトイレかー?

Yotsuba-, oi-, are you still using the toilet?

おーいよつば入ってんだろ?よつばー?

Oi, Yotsuba I’m entering, alright? Yotsuba?

——— 65 ———

カギしまつてる→つまり中にいる→でも返事がない…….

The lock is locked → which means she’s inside → but she isn’t answering …….

あ、れえ⁉︎いない⁉︎

(Maybe あれいない could be “that person isn’t(here)”?)

カギはー……あ!壊れたのかー⁉︎

As for the lock…… ah! It’s broken!?

——— 66 ———

どこ行くのー?

Where are you off to?

本屋さーん

The bookstore

今日もあっついなぁー

It’s hot today

——— end ———

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On page 64 the meaning is more “yotsuba, you are in there right?” since it’s progressive.
Page 65 of your transcript is a small tsu しまってる it really doesn’t look like it in the book, I know… :expressionless:
Also page 65 I read that as a split up and elongated あれ which can be a shout out at something surprising. (sorry can only find a monolingual entry for it which is a bit harder: あれ
[感]感動したり驚いたり、また不審に思ったりしたときに発する語。あら。おや。「あれ、変だなあ」 )
Edit: scratch that, found it Jisho.org: Japanese Dictionary

Hope you had fun with the pages.

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So it would be more natural for him to say 入るだろ if he’s warning her that he’s entering/asking for permission? Thanks for the insight :pray: I thought 入る was reserved for the act of entering, and that something like 中 would be used for the state of being inside.

:expressionless:

I felt like that could be a thing but I also couldn’t find the JP-English dictionary entry, thanks for looking it up for me :grin:

I did!

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Yes hairu is entering something. So the progressive of it 入っている is “being in a state one created by the action”. So entering and then being in this state kinda means being inside ^^. I would totally see him saying 入るだろ if he was anouncing hes entering now like you proposed (and is unsure if he should). Maybe he would use 入るよ or something to give the sentence a more assertive feel?

You can often also see this kind of meaning with kuru for example 来ている would probably be translated as “is here”. Or more finely grained as “being in the state created by coming here”.

Progressive is one of the fun things in Japanese. Note that not all progressive forms have this meaning. They can also indicate an ongoing action, prime example: 勉強している, that one started before.

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This is good to know :sweat_smile: initially I would just have thought of it as referring to the time between grabbing the door handle and having crossed the threshold, so I guess Japanese became slightly more ambiguous to me :stuck_out_tongue: nothing new about that ^^;

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I read another three pages🙃

よつばと!vol1, cha2, pp67,70-71 🍀

——— 67 ———

そっとしておこう

Best not to interfere (“leave it as it is” according to the cheat sheet)

——— 70 ———

あれ⁉︎ よつばちゃん

Huh!? Yotsuba

なにしてんの?

What are you up to?

あ!おとなりさん

Ah! The Neighbor

のきれいじゃない方だ

who isn’t pretty

えっ、なにそれ⁉︎

Eh- what’s that supposed to mean!?

ちゃんとお姉ちゃんの名前おぼえてよー、風香っていうの

Properly remember my name, which is to say: Fuuka

ふーか?

Fuuka?

——— 71 ———

そう、風 香るーと書いて、ふ。う。か

That’s right, it is written “wind” “pleasant fragrance” Fu•u•ka

(to smell sweet/pleasant, but that phrase doesn’t match her presentation. Well, “pleasant fragrance” doesn’t either but whatever^^;)

わけ、わかんねー‼︎

I don’t understand the explanation!!

和姦、ね‼︎” … thanks Jisho :sweat:

…で何してるの?よつばちゃん

So, what are you doing, Yotsuba?

——— end ———

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I’ve had a long day, so I just read one page for forms sake:/

よつばと!vol1, cha2, pp72 🍀

——— 72 ———

ふーか!これおして!

Fuuka! Press (the button)

へ?何?何か用なの?

He? What? You want me to help you?

うんっ、おしてっ

Yes, press

はい

Yes (sort of a yes, what can I do for you)

人でてきたー、だれー?

A person came out, who is it?

えっ⁉︎

Eh!?

——— end ———

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Keep going :smiley: 何か用なの? I would translate more like “Do you have some business (with them)?”

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I was leaning in that direction too, but Jisho gave me this result for 何か用 and it fits with よつば not being able to reach the bell, so that is what I went with.

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I think that’s a misunderstanding because some stuff is omitted. If you would say that sentence without any context the translation would make sense. For example if the lady coming out of the house said it. So meaning “do you have business with me” but in more normal english “may I help you” . But when you mean to help (really Help) someone you would say something else.
And the context is (for me at least) clear enough that fuuka wants to help yotsuba. If she was to ask if she should help she would use something like 手伝う or similar.

Hard to explain, maybe someone else can chime in… Do you get the gist though?

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