硝子の塔の殺人 🗼 (ABC) Week 10

硝子の塔の殺人 :tokyo_tower: Week 10

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Week 10 November 1st, 2025
Chapter(s) and sections 最終日: 4, 5, エピローグ
Start page 426
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Character names (p.6)

Full Name Occupation Room
神津島太郎こうづしまたろう 館の主人 壱の部屋
加々見剛かがみつよし 刑事 弐の部屋
酒泉大樹さかいずみたいき 料理人 参の部屋
一条遊馬いちじょうゆうま 医者 肆の部屋
碧月夜あおいつきよ 名探偵 伍の部屋
巴円香ともえもどか マイド 陸の部屋
夢読水晶ゆめよみすいしょう 霊能力者 漆の部屋
九流間行進くるまこうしん 小説家 捌の部屋
左京公介さきょうこうすけ 編集者 玖の部屋
老田真三おいたしんぞう 執事 拾の部屋
Illustrations before the prologue

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I feel like we’re going to wait a long time for that one…

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The rule is, you have to make a mistake somewhere when you make a new thread. This was the least worst one I could think of.

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So, this post will probably be a little longer. I wrote down many thoughts.

Now the whole thing makes a lot more sense to me. I totally forgot that 遊馬 didn’t investigate any of the bodies except for 加々見. All other bodies were deemed off limits by 加々見 which is probably a big reason why he seemed so suspicious to a lot of us readers.

The part I’m struggling the most with: it seems 神津島 had to plan the whole thing many, many years in advance. Gathering all the people (especially 左京 and 九流間), making connections, building the glass tower, etc., etc.
What I really like is that he tried to incorporate the 蝶々岳 murders into the story. Building the prison and using this as motivation for 加々見 seems so cool :smiley: .

The solution also neatly explains the problem I had with 加々見 having no idea about mystery novels and still was “friends” with 神津島. If he’s just a hired actor, all his behavior throughout the book makes total sense.

Regarding the 巴 eating part of the story. I distinctly remember 月夜 egging 巴 on to take the first bite. But at that time I actually thought she was just not sure if the food is poisoned and wanted somebody else to taste it first :smile:

I’m not really blown away by the reason for the murders. Just being bored and wanting to raise the stakes feels a little like a cop out. It fits with 月夜’s character, but it’s so over the top that it feels kinda mystery novel only.
I have to give it to the author. It explains why she was so down after 巴’s death. And then she gave her sad backstory. After that, I dropped most of my suspicion of her and really thought she just loves mysteries and wants to be a 名探偵. Serves me right :exploding_head: .

What I find funny about the book is that I think we found nearly all inconsistencies in our discussion together. BUT these inconsistencies are exactly what makes the story work. I’m especially proud to be so cynical of the explanation for the third murder. It’s the one that let 月夜 boil over as well. Not sure what it says about my own mental state though :thinking:
It also neatly explains why the 踊り人形 and the materials to solve it appeared. She just wanted to make it more interesting by helping 遊馬 a little.

I also chuckled about all the people in these threads being so suspicious about her showering in his room. Y’all were 100% right that she drugged him and used the time to commit murders. BUT she didn’t steal the master key from 酒泉, only the Key to room 3. So close.

Regarding here going free in the end. I feel like it’s definitely a better ending then they both die in the fire together. Wouldn’t have liked that ending. But I’d still have loved her somehow being captured in the end. The book painted her as such a smart and capable character, though, I’m not sure how such an ending could have been well crafted…

Regarding how I rate the book, I’m a little torn. If we are talking about the mysteries, I think it is well crafted. The conclusion feels satisfying to me, the prose is easy to read and flows exceptionally well.
BUT I can’t simply ignore the long stretch of pretty boring, “they go here, they exchange 5 lines of dialog, then they move there, talk some more”, where it feels like nothing substantial is happening. Maybe these parts are more exciting if you are more of a mystery novel buff than me. I think removing some of the ramblings and shortening the middle part would have probably improved the book for me.
The beginning first day with 遊馬’s murder and basically everything on the last day felt good though.

Probably a 4/5 overall? With a strong recommendation for anyone who wants to actually get into the “flow” while reading.

Now I’m just left waiting for all your impressions :smiley:
@pocketcat, @miwuc I’m also interesting what our silent observers have to say…

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I’ve been relistening to the audiobook at roughly the same pace as ya’ll so I can give fresh impressions (since I read this book 3 years ago). I’m hoping to wrap this weekend and will chime in then! :saluting_face: But I will say that I absolutely loved 月夜 on my first read and also wanted to shake 遊馬 multiple times because he’s such a dolt :tired_face: Also, as a fun bit of color for anyone who didn’t already know this, the author is himself a doctor and he writes a TON of mystery books with doctors as the MC. Some better than others. I think this is one of his best works. For people who want to avoid the pacing issues though, 仮面病棟 and its sequel 時間病棟 are probably good bets. They’re both much faster paced.

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I don’t have particularly insightful things to say, I quite liked the book overall although I agree that the whole middle part was quite slow. I’m glad I didn’t read the speculations so the reveal was a real surprise. I was really impressed with all the stuff y’all got right, like this comment which was spot on.
It was also fun seeing everyone say “this makes no sense!!” while knowing that it was part of the plot. I liked how everything tied together based on things that had been hinted at earlier (like Koudzushima’s bad writing). But that’s actually one small gripe I would have with the book: when Tsukiyo is solving the fake murders, she has to use the evidence available to find the solutions and rule out things that don’t make sense. But the solutions she found still don’t quite make sense, as pointed out in this last part. So how can she be sure that they’re the right answers?

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Finished as well!

And as I am writing this, it is night and there it is a clear blue sky outside, with the moonlight shining in my living room, very fitting… :slight_smile:

If last’s week winner word was こめかみ, then this week’s winner expression is definitely 水を向ける. Used five times this week, 12 times in total in the book.

Anyways. There weren’t that many surprises left for us with the final reveal, but I enjoyed the pace.
And from the moment where 月夜 announced that she had planted explosives, I was really surprised and had no idea where the whole thing would go. I liked the ending!
I do feel bad that 神津島 (yes, even him), 老田, 巴 and 加々見 really died, but I really think the author did a great job with this book. Repeating what others have said, but it’s really funny in hindsight, that the inconsistencies and suspicious things turned out to be part of the plot. All calculated. Meta book status achieved.
5/5 for me!

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Finale

“I can fix her” – 遊馬, a shotgun trained on his face.

I liked it! I always enjoy it when authors use the tropes of the genre against the reader. We had all noticed some weird inconsistencies in the previous cases (the implausibility of the body drop in the final case, the weird idea of burning the movie screen without triggering the fire system, the idea that the butler and the maid would casually assist such horrible human experiments etc…) but I just assumed that it was the inherent sloppiness in most detective stories and not a hint that something was afoot. I remember having a similar realization while watching the TV show “The Good Place”, although I won’t say more to avoid spoiling it.

You can still poke holes at the credibility of the story but it’s convincing enough I think. It does neatly wrap up almost every loose end so far in a somewhat reasonable way and while playing on the themes of the story. I especially like that the “real” murders are much simpler and straightforward than the complicated locked-room mysteries made up by island guy. Because of course in reality murderers don’t use these absurdly complicated mise en scenes. You just stab the guy and rig gasoline to blow up the place. This way the book can have it both ways: you have the high concept, unrealistic Cluedo-like murder mystery and a more grounded realistic thriller underpinning it all.

I don’t remember if I mentioned it but I also considered that 月夜 could have been the one who killed her parents, I thought that it would be weird for such a crime to be mentioned and not resolved, and that seemed like the obvious solution. In the same vein I also like that the unsolved crimes mentioned in passing at the start of the book are also effectively solved! I definitely did not see that coming. No resolution for the old OL murders however.

I’m still annoying that the 2nd crime in the dining room is supposed to be “the good one”. No it’s not. It’s the dumbest one. Stop it.

Overall it was a satisfying read, although it could really have used another editing pass to tighten everything up. You could probably cut a hundred pages or so and end up with a better paced story.

A few months ago I read Christie’s Death on the Nile and I remember thinking that, while the “mechanical trick” revealed by Poirot at the end of the story was well made and convincing enough, the characters were a bit too flat and uninteresting to really catch my attention. As such I did enjoy the reveal from an intellectual standpoint but emotionally it felt a bit hollow. I like that this book did manage to develop interesting characters, I found 月夜 a really good protagonist/antagonist (when she’s not rambling for pages on end about crime stories). I kind of wanted her to win at the end.

I don’t find 遊馬 quite as convincing, I feel like his personality changes completely once he understands what’s really going on. On one hand it’s partly understandable, psychologically it must be a big shock, but at the same time he goes from clueless idiot who tries to frame other people for his crimes and seriously considers attacking innocent people to protect himself to action hero who selflessly confronts (and flirts with?) the super-intelligent villain and puts his life on the line to help strangers while making jokes. It feels like completely different character.

Thank you @Akashelia for this club, it’s the first time I participate in an ABC and, while it was challenging to keep up, I’m happy that I did it. I definitely feel a difference in my reading speed from when I started, it was good practice Japanese-wise.

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I liked it, it fits with the themes of the story. It’s meta to the end. I prefer that to some far-fetched motive. “月夜 is batshit insane” is good enough of a motive for me, although I was surprised when I realized that 遊馬 earnestly followed along (I thought he was humoring her to gain time at first, but no he’s insane as well).

I was still happy that I clocked that she would have used the opportunity to snatch something, although I certainly didn’t think of this. At the same time I would argue that, even in hindsight, that part of the plan was pretty far-fetched, risking stealing a key just so that she could engineer a complicated way to push 遊馬 down the stairs… So many things could have gone wrong.

More generally at this point nobody had died, right? So island guy would be able to see everything she’s doing, including torturing the maid to gain access to the hidden staircase, no? The author didn’t waste a lot of time discussing how precisely the real murders took place, and I think that’s because that doesn’t fully make sense.

Definitely. Even that ending section could have been tighter. The part where they sort of flirt with each other is completely superfluous IMO. Also all these shenanigans with the tazer, the shotgun, the gasoline, her taking the cook hostage etc… None of this really adds to the situation. The author should have taken a hint from classical detective stories that often wrap everything up in only a few pages. Once the cat is out of the bag there’s no point padding 30 more pages. The epilogue was also completely pointless, it doesn’t tell us anything we couldn’t have guessed from the ending and the postcard is tacky IMO.

It was even more frustrating for me because I was rushing to finish to be able to read the spoilers in this thread and post my impressions while they’re still fresh!

I still think it’s on the high end of detective novels quality-wise. There’s a lot of slop there. 変な家 that was read in the IBC last year for instance was very entertaining but incredibly poorly crafted compared to this.

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Finished!
well a few days ago, but finally posting

Summary

Well that was an eventful final week of reading…

First up, from week 2 I kind of thought there was something going on with 神津島

But then as the weeks got by I moved away from that and eventually settled on 月夜 being behind everything. Turns out of course, both were technically right and wrong…
I didn’t see it switching from a prepared thing by 神津島 to 月夜 so late, I assumed it was her from the start eventually. 遊馬 kept giving quotes that people had said which obviously would serve as clues if you read them in the right frame of mind, but reading them the first time around they didn’t mean much. I think that’s the best way to do something like that

Then the action-movie style ending at the end! So much happened. I think it was a very satisfying ending, everything wrapped up nicely, no more people died, 月夜 found her new purpose and spared 遊馬 etc etc, it was good. Didn’t blow me away completely, but it was definitely satisfying.

Don’t have much more to say, あまり詳しくなんかない re. Japanese mystery, so I got most of the non-Japanese references, but had only heard of the Japanese ones in passing. I’m sure it would be a bit different knowing more of them, but on the other hand, it allows us to feel more like 夢読
Structurally I think this was a very good mystery. Not so sure about the writing style, it ebbed and flowed, but I did find that the end grabbed me in and I couldn’t put it down though. Happy to have read it!

Thanks to @Akashelia for hosting! And to everyone else for posting along

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:joy: the most important thing of course

Also second most important thing, remember to mark that you have read a book that has won the Honya Taishou Challenge :+1:

Thanks everyone for picking the book and reading along. I nominated it back in February so of course I had forgotten all about it when it got picked, and I panicked a bit with committing to such a big book (my 2nd longest so far) right now in the middle of a lot of other commitments, but I’m really happy I read it and in good company!

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This book hasn’t been translated into English yet, right? Isn’t that strange given that it seems to be well received in Japan? I feel like the endless sludge of light novels gets translated within a year usually.

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It doesn’t seem to be translated yet, no. I have no idea about what’s the usual process :woman_shrugging:

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Seeing as 七回死んだ男 recently got translated and it was a) published originally in the 1990s and b) one of the absolute worst Japanese mysteries I’ve ever read…I don’t think there’s really any rhyme or reason to what get’s picked to be translated

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Ok I have finished relistening to the audiobook and here are my refreshed thoughts on the ending:

I still love it :joy: I will say that having read now 17 (!) of this author’s books I do have things flavored a bit by being like ‘oh he always writes this style of character’ or ‘man he loves using this phrase’ I still think this is such a fun plot.
I also think my reaction to the pair suddenly absurdly flirting while talking about double suicide and bombs is a bit different because to me it feels somewhat like an homage to Edogawa Ranpo’s over the top style. There is at least one book with his main 名探偵 where the sexy female criminal totally had the hots for him I was like ‘ah yes this trope’ :rofl:
I think overall it does a good job of being a mystery book paying meta mystery style respect to a wide swath of giants in the genre.

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[眉を寄せる intensifies]

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