Missing a word in Mnemonic

which the tofu sect is living on.

They are quite responsive to typo corrections and small things by email.

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They already have “on” in the sentence

A tsunami hits the cliff on which the tofu sect is living.

Another one would be too repetitive, I think.

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The repetition is not the problem. Another “on” would make the sentence wrong.

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Yep, this is the correct grammar.

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Wouldn’t it be wrong because of the repetition? The following makes sense too, although I’d want to switch “with” to “that.”

A tsunami hits the cliff that the tofu sect is living on.

Unless you’re following the rule where you can’t end sentences with a preposition, of course.
(That’s a little too strict for my taste)

Well I guess you can say that the repetition makes the sentence wrong. I just meant that being repetitive by itself is not the problem here.

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Surely the point is moot. “A, on which B is living,” is perfectly acceptable grammar…

Edit: this ^. “A on which B is living on” sounds wrong because of the repetition; maybe it’s grammatically fine but it sounds silly.

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We’re on the same page, I just tend to phrase corrections softly so I don’t come across as a grammar nazi :sweat_smile:

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oh sorry i read over that on because i was expecting it to be on the end, my bad

thanks for the many responses

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