I’ve been working on this project for a while now and I think it deserves a thread distinct from the on where I post my other project. The homepage of this project is here .
What’s the Tile World Chronicles ?
The Tile World Chronicles are a set of stories in N4+ Japanese that intermediate learners can use as comprehensible input. Despite being written in simple language I intend to make the stories genuinely entertaining. Ideally even people who are fluent in Japanese would enoy reading them.
Why do I do that ?
Because I can.
What’s my inspiration ?
I am a Final Fantasy fan. Especially the old ones : FF6 & FF7. I am now too old to play these games and spend time fighting ennemies so I’ve decided to use them as inspiration to tell stories. However I do think encounters are a key element of the story telling in Final Fantasy so I have mad my best to have them present in my work.
In what type of world to the stories take place ?
The stories take place in a typical fantasy world quite close to FF6. The one thing that makes it unique is that this world features a technology that allows people to communicate remotely and form some sort of social networks.
What’s my timeline ?
At the time of writing I’ve been working on it on and off for 2/3 years or so and I expect the project to be achievable within a decade.
Am I a native speaker ?
I’m not. My Japanese is not even great. However I pay a freelancer to proofread my work and make the Japanese sound natural (she does wonders!). I actually believe being a learner helps as I know which words tend to be learnt first.
What technology do you use for the illustrations ?
My pages do use any image files. I use three different technologies that have the illustrations being stored as code & characters.
CSS generated Pixel art using some software developped by @TheCodingFox (thank you so much again for this !)
I’ve have just finished the 4th episode of Markus’ ascent.
This chapter contains less exploration than the previous ones and really builds up the story. As a result it contains more text than in the others is a bit more complicated.
I’ve made my best to keep the dialogues as simple as possible but still, it’s more N3 than N4.
I have finally finished Chapter 5 and 6 of Markus’ ascent (part 1) ! I’ve been at it for the past 6 months or so and producing the last chapters has required a lot of discipline. I still need to get it proofread and implement the corrections but this requires a lot less energy.
The story is about 110 pages long and I’m very proud of it. I think it really follows the spirit of the old Final Fantasy by mixing exploration, combats and proper plot.
I’m quite satisfied about how I developped Markus and Celestina’s relationship. I think my age and personal experience show in it. In some comment TwelveWishes (my number one reader) found some of their interactions cute .
People on this forum have always known me as a creator but it’s actually the first time I produce a piece of work such as this one. It’s a lot of work but creating a story tailored to my personal taste is very satisfying.
I’ll soon be releasing these last two chapters and then I’ll be working on shorter stories for some time.
As usual, the vocab is a bit harder after the corrections from the person who does the proofreading but I do not overthink it and let it as is. At least I’m sure the Japanese is correct and I can move to the next chapter.
I’meowt of likes, but huge thanks!
Just finished reading. The only bug I found is that I think on the last page
probably meant to be
長い旅を終えて、
Anyway, very interesting, huge thanks!
Was very sad about Selestina’s reaction, but that’s to be expected. Feels like watching a good anime. Looking forward to the next episode!
I have the chance to have a native Japanese speaker sitting next to me at work. He’s read all of Markus’ Ascent and only found two typos !
He also said about 70% of the text sounds native and 30% is correct but sounds ‘language learner Japanese’. Even I round it to 50%, I think that’s OK.
He also found the story cool and original which made my day
I’m very sorry to hear that. I really hope your situation would start improving soon! May the Great Cat of Opportunity help you overcome your problems and may the Great Cat of Peace and Harmony hiss away your anxiety and purrotect you!
It’s about Aryn who we already met in a previous story when she was still very young and got kidnapped by Gogotz. She’s now a bit older and we get to know her a little bit more.
Its end is when Aryn will join the main story (which I’ll write after writing the backstories of most of the main characters)
