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Week 11 14 January 2023
Story 12 and 13
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Story 12 is inspired by the kabuki play 紅葉狩. The plot is briefly summarized in the English Wikipedia article on the play.

Story 12 spoilers:

More company stuff. I notice that the peony-lamp sellers turn out to also work for the same company…

I didn’t dislike this story, but it didn’t make much impression on me either. Maybe that’s because I was distracted while I was reading it, though.

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Story 13 is also inspired by a kabuki play, this time 忍夜恋曲者 (which is read しのびよるこいはくせもの, obviously :smile: ). I found a kabuki website with a plot summary in English or if you prefer the reading challenge in Japanese.
I haven’t read the short story yet; I am hoping that it features the giant frog from the kabuki play

Edit having read the short story – I think the reading experience in this one probably differs rather depending on whether you have the kabuki play in the back of your mind, so pick for yourself whether you want to look it up before or after.

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Story 13 thoughts/spoilers

I liked this one. I suspect the reading experience would have been rather different if I hadn’t just read the kabuki plot summary and knew the ending scene featured the princess sitting on a giant frog staring intensely at her male antagonist, especially since the story only gradually dribbles out description of ガムちゃん…

Does the 大宅さん she’s had a date with get mentioned in any of the other stories? Not having an electronic copy of the book it’s trickier for me to search.

Little details I liked: the idea it would be much easier if you could just get food at a local canteen sometimes; that her ideal is “ガムちゃん and me and someone and someone”; that she has to do a lot of laundry.

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Story 12. I found this story very tiring and with little substance. So there’s one efficient team of ten people in that mysterious ghost company who help out wherever needed, and they are also very competitive in company-wide competitions. They usually win, but this time it was a dance competition and they lost to a team with more experience. So? What am I missing? And what’s the connection to the kabuki play?

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(Story 12.)

Maybe there’s more if you actually know the play rather than relying on Wikipedia, but it felt to me like a case where the author had pulled out a handful of elements and mixed them into her own story: dance; competitiveness (the play has a drinking competition with a guy), Sarashina-hime and her retinue of female attendants; maple leaves.

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Story 13.

A much more readable story this one, I liked it much more.

For the longest time, I was sure ガムちゃん was a cat :joy: Then thought some sort of slimy monster. Only after reading the kabuki summary did I realize ガムちゃん was a frog. And the narrator works for that same company, under fox lady.

A quick search showed no results in the book so far. I don’t know if he makes an appearance later.

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Story 13: Incidentally, I’m guessing that it’s ガムちゃん in the little illustration on the page at the back that lists all the sources of inspiration for the stories (p253 in the paperback version).

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Looks like it! Is that a telephone pole in front of her?

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Looks like the typical multi-use electricity-street-lamp-and-stuff pole that’s part of the ugliness of the Japanese urban streetscape, yes.

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It may be the one with the creepy man lurking in its shadow. What happened to the man? :scream:

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I thought of ガマちゃん as a cat, too, although I wondered a bit over its sliminess that is mentioned several times. The English version of the story mentions its true identity at the very end of the story saying ‘Keeping up with the washing is no joke when you live with an enormous toad.’ I think that the hint in the Japanese version was ガムちゃん’s first name ガマ which designates also a toad.

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Could you please post this for the owners of the e-book version?

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Story 13 reply

I discarded the cat idea after the sliminess was mentioned. :joy: I guess the basic hint for the nature of ガムちゃん was the description of colours and patterns, plus long tongue and sliminess. And for the Japanese readers, prior knowledge of the kabuki play? Interesting how English translations tend to spell things out. I’ve seen it in both this book and Eugenia. In Eugenia I don’t think it was needed at all, but here some cultural background is indeed necessary to understand the references.

It’s on one of the last pages of the ebook. I have the ebook too. You should have a “chapter” in the table of contents titled 各作品のモチーフ一覧

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Oh, I overlooked this totally. It looks like a kind of watermark.
Considering its size relatively to the pole, ガムちゃん is really enormous!

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Story 12.

Same. It just didn’t come to life for me the way some of the other stories did. Perhaps we’ll see more of this team later on and we’ll get the pay-off then? It would be a weirdly inconsequential story otherwise.

Also, it said something about a picture at the end of the story, but I don’t see any picture (at least not in the Kindle version). Is there a picture in the physical book…?

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No, there’s no photo in the paperback book either.

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Breaking news:
ガムちゃん has been caught in Australia!

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Response to article

WTF :rage:

Toadzilla has since been euthanised, as is standard practice in Australia for the pests, and will be donated to the Queensland Museum.

Edit: Okay, apparently cane toads are invaders that endanger local wildlife, so I suppose it’s justified. But still : amazing discovery of unique specimen of known species :star_struck: → killed it! :imp:

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I hate cane toads with a passion. They basically wipe out the native wildlife - mammals such as quolls eat them and die, and they compete with native frog species. They also kill a fair number of pet dogs.

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